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The Blue Eye by Matthias-Haker The Blue Eye by Matthias-Haker
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This is beautiful subject matter, skillfully assembled into a photo. It works well as is, but for me there are a few distractions that keep it from fully coming together.

The main one is are the windows in the lower left. I like how they provide a counterpoint for all the round elements, but they may draw a bit too much attention away from the stairwell. They are much bluer than the top of the stairwell and I find myself drawn to them because of that. I also don't know if the small piece of the second window adds much to the composition.

A second, much less noticeable distraction is the red thing behind the railing in the lower right. It is probably a simple matter to clone that out. At least for me it doesn't add anything to the shot.

I think it may be possible to strengthen this already very appealing shot by eliminating the second window and balancing the blueness of the ceiling with that of the window.
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:iconbluecreekphotography:
I love the contrast of the creams, tans and blues.... and the spiral just pulls you in.... makes me want to climb that staircase!
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DikDanger Featured By Owner Apr 20, 2010
great work!...
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PopcornCloud Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow that is very cool.... you have really captured a very interesting angle of this staircase!! The colours you have have managed to keep a simplistic colour scheme and it has really helped you produce a good piece.
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Matthias-Haker Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2010  Professional Photographer
Thankk you very much :D
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SilvaKinzelmann Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
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Matthias-Haker Featured By Owner Feb 4, 2010  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much :D
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shenik Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautiful and hypnotizing @_@
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Matthias-Haker Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2010  Professional Photographer
Thank you!
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Forestina-Fotos Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
Fantastic shot! :clap:
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Matthias-Haker Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2010  Professional Photographer
Thank you very much :D
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